Talk:Newbie tutorial
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Flow & styling
Excellent tutorial! But I have a few things which I think would make this even better:
- Splitting long sentences & grouping into paragraphs to make it easier to read.
- Adding a few explaining screenshots where needed
- Linking to further reading
I've done a few of these already, but the article could use some more work --Isakus 22:06, 13 July 2009 (BST)